observation

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Saturday, 19-Jul-2008 3:02:25

On the corner a man decays as he tries to touch the world with his words
A women stands out side her door sweeping time into a pile.
A teen walks through the ally of his life running away finding dead ends at every turn
A child cries out from her soul, afraid to open her eyes, scared of the shadows that threaten her life.
The homeless sleep covered in their dreams, as their stomachs turn hungry for life
A soldier sits holding a picture of his wife and unborn son in his mind.
A person prays for piece in the world, but in the day was asked for charity and looked away.
The moon watches over his sister mother earth as she passes away.
Nothing he can do to save her just observe.
His light spills over her as he cries.

Post 2 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Saturday, 19-Jul-2008 13:19:11

wow Maria. that was...wow.

Post 3 by SunshineAndRain (I'm happily married, a mom of two and a fulltime college student.) on Wednesday, 23-Jul-2008 16:29:01

Wow. Nice, I like it. Have thought many times about writing y own observations poem, but never did. You've inspired me. Great work.